I wrote this what do u think?

I think everyone had fun as a kid. Especialy when it rained. Remember that? You’d go outside, and you’d jump in the mucky water. Not me. I hated it. And what made it worse, my neighborhood friends who are now living somewhere in Nevada by now, always made me jump in it. They’d be like; “Common Steph!” They’d try to tempt me into doing it; “You know you want to.” Ah, no. I don’t “want to”. But just because they were my friends, I’d stick my foot in to make them happy. (Sticks foot out and move it from side to side) I’d even fake a grin, I’d be like; (fake smile and rolls eyes) “woo-hoo.” Yeah, that was worth 5 seconds of my life. Thanks for sharing that with me.